Kieran123's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Penalty trainer]

could be good

thisd be so good if u could move better. i had heaps of trouble runnin. u shud get rid of da runnin bit nd just up his overall speed then have difrent balls curvin in n stuff.

[Dark Maze]

badly layed out

i thought this was a good idea besides how the mouse could move through walls. i don't care about that but evry1 els will. i didn't know wer i was meant to go and couldn seem to go to the 2nd level. if u cant find a code for the walls then you could just try using a character controled with arow keys caus its easy to make walls 4 dat. if u did want to keep the mouse u shud try changin wat it looks lik. fix deese probs nd u got a good game.

Kwing responds:

It isn't flawed... ( : P ) You're probably just not looking close enough, but if you hit the start and hit a wall, you're sent back so you restart the level.

[Joogler]

nice

a nice game but wouldn't want to play it again. i only died after ther wer a few squares and wen i went to catch them it jittered and went under me. it feels like itd be much better if you added something more to the game;play to stop it bein so boring after a while. i scored 1797 but i only lost after my computer started to lag.

[Custom Cursor Made Easy]

good

nice.
I think its good how you just told the veiwer hoe to do it simply and quickly.
The only reason anyone would complain about this is because its to short or that theyre beginners and don't know how to make a movieclip. u shud put a begginners version inside this flash that goes into more detail for them.

polyrhythmm responds:

good point, but I'm not interested in teaching people who dont know how to make a movieclip

[Mog's Run]

boring

I like the idea of this game but its just to boring. You need to speed up how fast mogs size increases and add a few more features or you just get bored. Untill then its just boring.

[Choose Your Square]

hey

I know ur noy good at actionscript but u should use ure button knoweledge for propa games. I don't know that much either but im makin a big shootin game only usin the buttons. Please try and put sum more thought into ur games because that was just boring.

[3 Maze Game]

big file size

hey its good that ye got sum songs but u need to compress them so the games smaller and theres less of a loading time.

[Cat who can Play Guitar!!]

boring

i dont think theres anything directly wrong with this its just a boring idea. Needs a lot more sound so its just a good soundboard. When u put effort into it to make it like that then i wont blam it.

[Untangle 1.2]

this sucks

this looks like a good idea to me but it still has HEAPS of problems.
1. I thought it got way to hard to quick. i was only up to the 3rd one and i couldn't complete it.
2. the reason i didnt complete the 3rd one was because I was already bored and didn't want to untagle sum lines.
3. i also got very confused wether or not i was untangling the lines right or if id completed it.
4. It was also to short. for something to get hard so quickly in such a short game isnt good for people who arnt good at theese sort of games.
hope u look into theese sort of problem,s forur next game.

[Reindeer Crusher]

worth playing

this game is ok but only ok. feels like it needs a bit more of a feature in the gameplay. maybe if u could attack them in a bit more of a sophisticated way and it needs to be a lot harder. Im crap at most online games but i found that just to easy. Its also a bit short but if it did have heaps of levels i wouldnt be bothered playing all of them because the gameplay isnt good enough

ChromeShark responds:

Thanks for your comments. People said the last game in this series (Bounce Crusher) was too hard, so I tried to make this one easier to play.